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Iurus |
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As long as Han, Luke, Leia, and Allana are alive at the end of your fiction, it's fine as far as MF is concerned (do we even know the ship is actually in
it, officially, as compared to memories and factoids?). And yes, as long it matches the other requirements, it could be in Chiss space as far as I care.
Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power. Through power, I gain victory. Through victory, my chains are broken. The Force shall free me. |
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BobaKareu |
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Awesome! I'm thinking more along the lines of... not of this world, though...
I'll post my DP in the early afternoon probably. I'm probably going to divide the DP up into groups, like Stackpole used to do. It's efficient. And it hides the fact that I have too many characters for a DP
The Complete Star Wars EU Journey:
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Anonymous170694 |
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I can't decide on a DP, mostly because I'm not sure which characters are going to be involved. But characters who have already appeared are Jacen,
Jaina, Tenel Ka, Allana, Han, Leia, and Tahiri. My story will focus on Tahiri, so I'm not sure how many other sideplots I'll add in.
Suddenly Jacen could see his challenge, and the prospect terrified him. He would have to kill those he most loved. He would have to kill Tenel Ka and his
precious daughter, his Allana. The fact that even the thought of it was tearing out his heart was the terrible proof that it had to be so.
And still he could hardly bear think it. The Yuuzhan Vong thought they knew all there was to know about inflicting pain, but they were beginners compared to this. How could he even think it? Jacen put his right hand to his face and touched it, as if it weren't his own. He felt as if he were standing over by the far wall, watching himself die by degrees. Is it me? Is it really my burden? Yes, Grandfather. It's me. Jacen accepted the burden in its entirety, and his heart- irrelevant, fragile, expendable- broke. ______________________________________________________________________ "Something to remember the next time you decide to play the Hapan game of bloodletting and backstabbing." Jacen Solo to the "Esteemed Queen Mother of the Hapan Consortium" |
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Zinnos |
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I'm probably going to divide the DP up into groups, like Stackpole used to do. It's efficient. And it hides the fact that I have too many characters for a DPLike Allston did in Enemy Lines. Daala Count- 20 and counting ****************************************************** Then the forlorn look left her face, replaced by a slight smile. "After all, everything I tell you is a lie." Jacen cleared his throat. "That is an interesting turn of phrase." *********************************************** "You'll send a skiff?" Caedus fumed. "Tenel Ka, you can't believe I'm going to surrender- to you or anyone else." "I am hoping you will," Tenel Ka's voice was sad but firm. "because it is going to break my heart to open fire on you." ************************************************* Hapans Rule All. *************
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MrNomAnor |
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What I want to know is has it been locked down as to who is judging this? And do we get to read everyone else's stories when the competition is over?
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BobaKareu |
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I was under the impression we would all post the stories, and they'd be open for all to read?
The Complete Star Wars EU Journey:
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Iurus |
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What I want to know is has it been locked down as to who is judging this? If you're not entering, you still have the option of emailing me to be a judge. I was under the impression we would all post the stories, and they'd be open for all to read? Correct.
Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power. Through power, I gain victory. Through victory, my chains are broken. The Force shall free me. |
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Anonymous170694 |
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I've set my story as more of a word document, but I can also copy and paste the contents into a post...
Suddenly Jacen could see his challenge, and the prospect terrified him. He would have to kill those he most loved. He would have to kill Tenel Ka and his
precious daughter, his Allana. The fact that even the thought of it was tearing out his heart was the terrible proof that it had to be so.
And still he could hardly bear think it. The Yuuzhan Vong thought they knew all there was to know about inflicting pain, but they were beginners compared to this. How could he even think it? Jacen put his right hand to his face and touched it, as if it weren't his own. He felt as if he were standing over by the far wall, watching himself die by degrees. Is it me? Is it really my burden? Yes, Grandfather. It's me. Jacen accepted the burden in its entirety, and his heart- irrelevant, fragile, expendable- broke. ______________________________________________________________________ "Something to remember the next time you decide to play the Hapan game of bloodletting and backstabbing." Jacen Solo to the "Esteemed Queen Mother of the Hapan Consortium" |
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MizzeeOH |
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Are you covering the entire duel? From whose point of view?
Jacen's, and yes, I'm covering it all the way up to his death. Have it completely done.... I think it's good. "The deeds of heroes send ripples spreading through the Force. Anakin's life continues to flow outward, touching and guiding those who have yet to hear his name. Most of us here use the Force-this young man embodied it." -Kyp Durron |
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DarkJedi |
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Did you get my email, Iurus? About judging?
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---The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents. We live on a placid island of ignorance in the midst of black seas of infinity, and it was not meant that we should voyage far... H.P Lovecraft. "The Call of Cthulhu" |
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revmacd |
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I emailed as well with no response. I'd like to do it and get one single numbered or bulleted copy of the rules.
"I think a chicken, a coffee mug, or something that resembles coleslaw would
best represent me...
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BobaKareu |
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*gulp*
Here's my current DP. Characters may be added (unlikely) or removed (very likely) between now and the contest deadline. Depends on how deep I ultimately decide to run this idea. The Jedi Ben Skywalker; Jedi Knight (male human) Corran Horn; Jedi Master (male human) Jaina Solo; Sword of the Jedi (female human) Kyp Durron; Jedi Master (male human) Leia Organa Solo; Jedi Knight (female human) Luke Skywalker; Jedi Grand Master (male human) Zekk; Jedi Knight (male human) The Mandalorians Baltan Carid; Mandalorian warrior (male human) Boba Fett; Mandalore the Lost (male human) Ghes Orade; Mandalorian warrior (male human) Goran Beviin; Mandalorian warrior (male human) Gotab; Mandalorian healer, former Jedi Bardan Jusik (male human) Medrit Vasur; Mandalorian farmer (male human) Mirta Gev; Mandalorian bounty hunter (female human) Ram Zerimar; Mandalorian sniper (male human) The One Sith Dician; One Sith (female human) Morto; One Sith (male Togorian) Vongerella; One Sith (female Yuuzhan Vong) White Eyes; One Sith (male human) The Exiles Darth Caedus; Sith Lord (male human) Darth Vectivus; Sith Lord (male human) Lumiya; Dark Lady of the Sith (female human) Onimi; former Supreme Overlord (male Yuuzhan Vong) Palpatine; Supreme Sith Master (male human) Vergere; enigma (female Fosh) The Politicians Jagged Fel; New Galactic Empire High Moff (male human) Nas Choka; Warmaster (male Yuuzhan Vong) Natasi Daala; Galactic Alliance Chief of State (female human) Tenal Ka; Hapan Queen Mother (female human) Venku Skirata; Mandalorian warrior and politician (male human) The Underbelly Bossk; bounty hunter (male Trandoshan) Callista Ming; former Jedi (female human) Dash Rendar; freelance smuggler (male human) Guri; freelance smuggler (female Human Droid Replica) Han Solo; captain, Millennium Falcon (male human) Kir Kanos; former Imperial Royal Guard (male human) Raynar Thul; rehabilitation patient (male human) Savan; Head of Black Sun (female Falleen) Sintas Vel; bounty hunter (female Kiffar) Tahiri Veila; rehabilitation patient (female human) Wrenga Jixton; former Imperial agent (male human)
The Complete Star Wars EU Journey:
http://www.bobakareu.blogspot.com/
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anakinsoloII |
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While am curious as to the amount of dead people, I must say:
Anything with Kir Kanos in it is usually awesome.
Anakin Solo=BEST SW CHARACTER EVER
Anakin Solo fans: 7 Currently reading: Revenge of the Sith *insert sarcastic line here* I was there. I was there, on 7/6/08, when there were a million people on LC. <------ What I strive for
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Zinnos |
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Wow...that is a lot of returning favorites...except for Harrar. Very dissapointed!
Daala Count- 20 and counting ****************************************************** Then the forlorn look left her face, replaced by a slight smile. "After all, everything I tell you is a lie." Jacen cleared his throat. "That is an interesting turn of phrase." *********************************************** "You'll send a skiff?" Caedus fumed. "Tenel Ka, you can't believe I'm going to surrender- to you or anyone else." "I am hoping you will," Tenel Ka's voice was sad but firm. "because it is going to break my heart to open fire on you." ************************************************* Hapans Rule All. *************
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MrNomAnor |
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Boba... I think... I think... I love you.
Scratch that. I saw VONGERELLA listed, so I DO love you. |
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BobaKareu |
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MrNomAnor wrote: Well she won't be actually named Vongerella in the story, that's just a placeholder name for her. Glad you liked it. I had a feeling you would.
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Zinnos |
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And how can all those characters fit into one fan fic...it must be very long.
Daala Count- 20 and counting ****************************************************** Then the forlorn look left her face, replaced by a slight smile. "After all, everything I tell you is a lie." Jacen cleared his throat. "That is an interesting turn of phrase." *********************************************** "You'll send a skiff?" Caedus fumed. "Tenel Ka, you can't believe I'm going to surrender- to you or anyone else." "I am hoping you will," Tenel Ka's voice was sad but firm. "because it is going to break my heart to open fire on you." ************************************************* Hapans Rule All. *************
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BobaKareu |
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It probably will be
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Anonymous170694 |
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The DP seems longer than the DP of SBS. It looks like Iurus will get his wish after all
EDIT: Alright, decided on which characters to include, and I've left out most of the minor characters. Here's my DP. They'll all be seen during the fanfic, but I can't guarantee that they'll all have major roles. The only three characters who are assured of major roles are Caedus, Tahiri, and Tenel Ka. At least one character who has appeared in more than one of the LOTF books will die in the fanfic, but thats all, I think. And I'll try and include a cameo for at least one member of the Jedi Council. HINT: If you look carefully at the DP, you'll notice something regarding one of the characters. A promotion of sorts. Amelia Solo; War orphan (human female) Ben Skywalker; Jedi Knight (human male) Darth Caedus (formerly Jacen Solo); Sith Lord (human male) Han Solo; captain, Millenium Falcon (human male) Jaina Solo; Jedi Master, (human female) Leia Organa Solo; Jedi Knight (human female) Tahiri Veila; Sith Apprentice, (human female) Tenel
Ka; Hapan Queen Mother, (human female)
Suddenly Jacen could see his challenge, and the prospect terrified him. He would have to kill those he most loved. He would have to kill Tenel Ka and his
precious daughter, his Allana. The fact that even the thought of it was tearing out his heart was the terrible proof that it had to be so.
And still he could hardly bear think it. The Yuuzhan Vong thought they knew all there was to know about inflicting pain, but they were beginners compared to this. How could he even think it? Jacen put his right hand to his face and touched it, as if it weren't his own. He felt as if he were standing over by the far wall, watching himself die by degrees. Is it me? Is it really my burden? Yes, Grandfather. It's me. Jacen accepted the burden in its entirety, and his heart- irrelevant, fragile, expendable- broke. ______________________________________________________________________ "Something to remember the next time you decide to play the Hapan game of bloodletting and backstabbing." Jacen Solo to the "Esteemed Queen Mother of the Hapan Consortium"
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petersearing |
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i shant be commetting on any of the dps posted up due be requesting to be on the judging panal it might influence me
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