Acky, looks like the way I emailed it to you is gonna be final.
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Iurus |
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Ok, talked to Zinnos already, anyone who wants to judge please email gfresh06@gmail.com.
Acky, looks like the way I emailed it to you is gonna be final.
Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power. Through power, I gain victory. Through victory, my chains are broken. The Force shall free me. |
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Zinnos |
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Well...I think I came up with a plot.
And I made a DP. I love making them! Here it is: Han Solo; captain, Millennium Falcon (human male) Izal Waz; Jedi Knight (Arcona male) Jaina Solo; Sword of the Jedi (human female) Leia Organa Solo; copilot, Millennium Falcon, Jedi Knight (human female) Saba Sebatyne; Jedi Master (Barabel female) Salle Serpa; Galactic Alliance strategist (human male) Tenel Ka; Hapan Queen Mother (human female) Tesar Sebatyne; Jedi Knight (human male) And it may change over time. Daala Count- 20 and counting ****************************************************** Then the forlorn look left her face, replaced by a slight smile. "After all, everything I tell you is a lie." Jacen cleared his throat. "That is an interesting turn of phrase." *********************************************** "You'll send a skiff?" Caedus fumed. "Tenel Ka, you can't believe I'm going to surrender- to you or anyone else." "I am hoping you will," Tenel Ka's voice was sad but firm. "because it is going to break my heart to open fire on you." ************************************************* Hapans Rule All. *************
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Anonymous170694 |
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Salle Serpa is a "Galactic Alliance strategist"? More like GAG nutcase.
Suddenly Jacen could see his challenge, and the prospect terrified him. He would have to kill those he most loved. He would have to kill Tenel Ka and his
precious daughter, his Allana. The fact that even the thought of it was tearing out his heart was the terrible proof that it had to be so.
And still he could hardly bear think it. The Yuuzhan Vong thought they knew all there was to know about inflicting pain, but they were beginners compared to this. How could he even think it? Jacen put his right hand to his face and touched it, as if it weren't his own. He felt as if he were standing over by the far wall, watching himself die by degrees. Is it me? Is it really my burden? Yes, Grandfather. It's me. Jacen accepted the burden in its entirety, and his heart- irrelevant, fragile, expendable- broke. ______________________________________________________________________ "Something to remember the next time you decide to play the Hapan game of bloodletting and backstabbing." Jacen Solo to the "Esteemed Queen Mother of the Hapan Consortium" |
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Zinnos |
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Well, he is well liked by Caedus, and despite his craziness, I think he'd be given a high position.
Daala Count- 20 and counting ****************************************************** Then the forlorn look left her face, replaced by a slight smile. "After all, everything I tell you is a lie." Jacen cleared his throat. "That is an interesting turn of phrase." *********************************************** "You'll send a skiff?" Caedus fumed. "Tenel Ka, you can't believe I'm going to surrender- to you or anyone else." "I am hoping you will," Tenel Ka's voice was sad but firm. "because it is going to break my heart to open fire on you." ************************************************* Hapans Rule All. *************
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MrNomAnor |
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You can't really list a person as a "nutjob" in your DP anyways; it's hardly an official title or rank/position.
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Zinnos |
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Well...if you can list a character as 'chud' even if it is a typo, anything is possible.
Daala Count- 20 and counting ****************************************************** Then the forlorn look left her face, replaced by a slight smile. "After all, everything I tell you is a lie." Jacen cleared his throat. "That is an interesting turn of phrase." *********************************************** "You'll send a skiff?" Caedus fumed. "Tenel Ka, you can't believe I'm going to surrender- to you or anyone else." "I am hoping you will," Tenel Ka's voice was sad but firm. "because it is going to break my heart to open fire on you." ************************************************* Hapans Rule All. *************
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Acky12 |
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Iurus wrote: OK - I will post tomorrow. Do I need to e-mail you about judging even if we've expressed interest in this thread?
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Iurus |
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I'd prefer that, so that I have a single, easily accessible list of people that I can refer back to when necessary.
Peace is a lie, there is only passion. Through passion, I gain strength.
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Anonymous170694 |
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How much have you people done on the fan-fiction? Has anyone finished it yet? Just curious to know...
I'm at 4000 words, hopefully, I'll be able to wrap things up within 10,000. Not quite SBS, but will that be acceptable, Iurus?
Suddenly Jacen could see his challenge, and the prospect terrified him. He would have to kill those he most loved. He would have to kill Tenel Ka and his
precious daughter, his Allana. The fact that even the thought of it was tearing out his heart was the terrible proof that it had to be so.
And still he could hardly bear think it. The Yuuzhan Vong thought they knew all there was to know about inflicting pain, but they were beginners compared to this. How could he even think it? Jacen put his right hand to his face and touched it, as if it weren't his own. He felt as if he were standing over by the far wall, watching himself die by degrees. Is it me? Is it really my burden? Yes, Grandfather. It's me. Jacen accepted the burden in its entirety, and his heart- irrelevant, fragile, expendable- broke. ______________________________________________________________________ "Something to remember the next time you decide to play the Hapan game of bloodletting and backstabbing." Jacen Solo to the "Esteemed Queen Mother of the Hapan Consortium" |
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Zinnos |
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I think he mentioned it had to be at least 1000 words.
And I have only started mine, the first part is done only. Daala Count- 20 and counting ****************************************************** Then the forlorn look left her face, replaced by a slight smile. "After all, everything I tell you is a lie." Jacen cleared his throat. "That is an interesting turn of phrase." *********************************************** "You'll send a skiff?" Caedus fumed. "Tenel Ka, you can't believe I'm going to surrender- to you or anyone else." "I am hoping you will," Tenel Ka's voice was sad but firm. "because it is going to break my heart to open fire on you." ************************************************* Hapans Rule All. *************
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Anonymous170694 |
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Me too, I haven't gotten the first few POV's over yet. Still at Tenel Ka's second POV.
Suddenly Jacen could see his challenge, and the prospect terrified him. He would have to kill those he most loved. He would have to kill Tenel Ka and his
precious daughter, his Allana. The fact that even the thought of it was tearing out his heart was the terrible proof that it had to be so.
And still he could hardly bear think it. The Yuuzhan Vong thought they knew all there was to know about inflicting pain, but they were beginners compared to this. How could he even think it? Jacen put his right hand to his face and touched it, as if it weren't his own. He felt as if he were standing over by the far wall, watching himself die by degrees. Is it me? Is it really my burden? Yes, Grandfather. It's me. Jacen accepted the burden in its entirety, and his heart- irrelevant, fragile, expendable- broke. ______________________________________________________________________ "Something to remember the next time you decide to play the Hapan game of bloodletting and backstabbing." Jacen Solo to the "Esteemed Queen Mother of the Hapan Consortium" |
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Zinnos |
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I haven't even gotten that far, Anon.
Daala Count- 20 and counting ****************************************************** Then the forlorn look left her face, replaced by a slight smile. "After all, everything I tell you is a lie." Jacen cleared his throat. "That is an interesting turn of phrase." *********************************************** "You'll send a skiff?" Caedus fumed. "Tenel Ka, you can't believe I'm going to surrender- to you or anyone else." "I am hoping you will," Tenel Ka's voice was sad but firm. "because it is going to break my heart to open fire on you." ************************************************* Hapans Rule All. *************
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Anonymous170694 |
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I only got that far because I started when I first noticed the fanfic contest, before the spoiler ban was done, so I'm not really that fast. I just wanted
to correct some problems (for me) regarding LOTF
Suddenly Jacen could see his challenge, and the prospect terrified him. He would have to kill those he most loved. He would have to kill Tenel Ka and his
precious daughter, his Allana. The fact that even the thought of it was tearing out his heart was the terrible proof that it had to be so.
And still he could hardly bear think it. The Yuuzhan Vong thought they knew all there was to know about inflicting pain, but they were beginners compared to this. How could he even think it? Jacen put his right hand to his face and touched it, as if it weren't his own. He felt as if he were standing over by the far wall, watching himself die by degrees. Is it me? Is it really my burden? Yes, Grandfather. It's me. Jacen accepted the burden in its entirety, and his heart- irrelevant, fragile, expendable- broke. ______________________________________________________________________ "Something to remember the next time you decide to play the Hapan game of bloodletting and backstabbing." Jacen Solo to the "Esteemed Queen Mother of the Hapan Consortium" |
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Zinnos |
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See, I didn't start until two days ago...took me a while to find inspiration.
Daala Count- 20 and counting ****************************************************** Then the forlorn look left her face, replaced by a slight smile. "After all, everything I tell you is a lie." Jacen cleared his throat. "That is an interesting turn of phrase." *********************************************** "You'll send a skiff?" Caedus fumed. "Tenel Ka, you can't believe I'm going to surrender- to you or anyone else." "I am hoping you will," Tenel Ka's voice was sad but firm. "because it is going to break my heart to open fire on you." ************************************************* Hapans Rule All. *************
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BobaKareu |
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I'm tempted to post my DP...
Should I?
The Complete Star Wars EU Journey:
http://www.bobakareu.blogspot.com/
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Acky12 |
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"It can be submitted any time between now and the official release of Millennium Falcon"
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BobaKareu |
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Aye, I saw that... I'm slow
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MizzeeOH |
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I started as soon as the contest was announced. So far, I have the first segment, a small part with Zekk's POV, and I have the entire duel and Jacen's
death done. Possibly Tenel Ka's reaction, but I'm not sure about that part....
"The deeds of heroes send ripples spreading through the Force. Anakin's life continues to flow outward, touching and guiding those who have yet to hear his name. Most of us here use the Force-this young man embodied it." -Kyp Durron |
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Anonymous170694 |
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Are you covering the entire duel? From whose point of view?
Suddenly Jacen could see his challenge, and the prospect terrified him. He would have to kill those he most loved. He would have to kill Tenel Ka and his
precious daughter, his Allana. The fact that even the thought of it was tearing out his heart was the terrible proof that it had to be so.
And still he could hardly bear think it. The Yuuzhan Vong thought they knew all there was to know about inflicting pain, but they were beginners compared to this. How could he even think it? Jacen put his right hand to his face and touched it, as if it weren't his own. He felt as if he were standing over by the far wall, watching himself die by degrees. Is it me? Is it really my burden? Yes, Grandfather. It's me. Jacen accepted the burden in its entirety, and his heart- irrelevant, fragile, expendable- broke. ______________________________________________________________________ "Something to remember the next time you decide to play the Hapan game of bloodletting and backstabbing." Jacen Solo to the "Esteemed Queen Mother of the Hapan Consortium" |
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BobaKareu |
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So I can have just the prologue begin during Invincible, and take the rest of the story elsewhere?
My other (admittedly more complex) question is how well will our entries have to jive with MF? Obviously we don't know much about it, or who will appear aside from being a Han/Leia/Allana adventure that ends with a whimper. But I don't want to make revelations in my story, only to have them be negated when MF hits.
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